
I had to do some heavy editing on the restaurant piece in order to fit both stories on the bottom half of the page. The donation story was edited down a bit too, and while this process was tedious and time-consuming, it definitely taught me the importance of being able to pick out the most important information in a story and eliminate the extraneous.
I originally had the bottom half of the page split into two almost equal sides, with bumping headlines. When Joe pointed out that this was a concern, I made the photo of the donation larger to take up two columns worth of space, and split that story's headline into multiple lines, which I hadn't thought to do before. I then found a graphic for Zingo to put in some space left behind, and that added a great element of interest to the page. I think it's very important to break up the text on a page, whether you use photos or pull interesting graphics from outside resources, so that the reader is not overwhelmed by grey matter.
This activity really taught me a lot about design and about the tools that are used in creating a newspaper layout. I am a magazine major, and I am excited about using InDesign in my career. I was frustrated at first, as I had little experience with the program prior to our lab, but I now feel like I have a good foundation of knowledge on which to build.
I had to edit my stories a lot too. Your page looks really good and I like how large you made the pictures! I think it really pulls the page together and makes it very appealing to the eye.
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